the story of the devil louise ex

hello this is just a lf2 recording the story talks about :

once apon a time there was louise then after he was a freind with the little fighters ......julian armys :bandits maked a new invention that can make any one be invisible to others then one of bandits taked louise to there place and he was scared that place was very dark and quit they maked him a sleep then they put something in his head and make him devil and he transformed automatically to louise ex and they ordered him to kill every one in lf2 but they didnot know how to control him then he went to kill every body even julian here is the recording:http://www.mediafire.com/?oy2zeyaqkwh

and at the end..................... to be continue

Hey, when I opened the file, it said:

RECORDING FILE ERROR! RECORDING CANCELLED!

I'm sorry but I couldn't view your recording ;-(

i maked it on another server:http://www.megaupload.com/?d=QDZHH06Z
but tell me isnot the story introduction good

maybe you are using a modified stage? you must use the same stage as in the recording to watch it on lf2.
i think the introduction story is okay. good or bad the story will be depends on the next parts of the story ^^ , but one problem is the grammar and spelling . It can get someone confused when the story gets more complicated.

part 2 of the story


http://www.mediafire.com/?f0qy4mgzozw


dont be foolished in the part one louise ex is not dead he just acted that he died on the good louise ex but the devil louise ex killed the bad louise ex in the part two jlian bringed his freind frizen to control him after louise ex finshed all of the little fighters n the survial place

he went to the queens island to find them.